Rhythm

The one thing that understands the human soul

The one comfort that speaks

The rhythm of its heart beat

You can feel the intensity or the sweetness

You can find yourself drowning yourself in it

You can get lost in it

You feel the words brush your skin and the inside of your skull

You feel the emotion it gives willingly

You feel one with it

Music

Reviews

[Alice]

This is a good poem! I cannot explain myself thoroughly enough to explain how well you wrote your poem. You were able to put your feelings and thoughts about music into words, a thing which is difficult for me to do.

I also really like how you used the strike-through and lighter font color to show that it all cancels out to mean music. It looks cool, now that I actually notice it. It took me several times to notice that though ^^;

Your poem is creative, and your formatting of the poem has been noticed, my friend. :)

[Ilana]

Thank you my favorite biatch! Love you gurl! :)

[Reese]

I feel this all the time and I love the feeling of getting lost in it like there is no more blissful place in the wrold

[Ilana]

Me. All the time.

[BookWorm]

Wow....I really really like this poem. Like save it and put it on my wall like it. This is an amazing job, and speaks to antisocial weirdos like me. Love It!

[Ilana]

Thank you so much. I am also an antisocial weirdo so people like us seem to get along much better. Haha. This really means a lot to me. Thanks again.