360

Make of it what you will.

Holding myself together
Taping up the cracks
Resisting the urge
To let the water pour out
Just another product recalled
Taken off of the shelf

Fear tantalizes the mind
Around and around in a circle
Like a dog that's about to die
Losing its mind
White in its eyes
A confusing life
360 degrees with no end in sight

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[Flame DM]

took me awhile to figure out 360, but then i realised 360 degrees is a circle! (the closer and closer someone gets to the holidays...i swear minds turn into mush!) the theme fits and i can see the desperation. (I dont write long review sry but i did enjoy this alot!)

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[ilurvekinilaw]

Concise poem. I could sense the desperation you wanted to convey, the feeling that your fingertips are already slipping off the rooftop of some high building. One thing though: I could imagine the title "360" as a never-ending cycle of faults but at the same time another thought popped into my mind. It seems that the title also suggests an about-face, or turning one's back on something. I dunno, that's just how I see it.