Verbal abuse

My take and personal feelings on verbaal abuse.

Words penetrate like bullets A-flame, demolishing through liquid tissues.

 

Tasteless criticism stick to ones brain as if it were a fine tune.

 

Symphonies of aching pain play wildly to a point where the mind can no

Longer comprehend as we sit in our rooms, in a corner, crying.

 

Because words hurt more than people think, these words... these words are a

Sickness hitting the stomach with tremendous force making headache's brew. We vomit

Concentrated frustration and exhale pain with every compressed breath.

 

Our minds are like nitrogen cylinders that were all used up and are now tossed away.

 

Finally, a way to escape, take this blade child, cut through distraught and roll in its homicide.

 

a gushing tube of tissues releases your life... you are free from tyranny.

 

 

Reviews

[Dushyant Thadani]

You know what... with a little rhythm, this would be an amazing poem. Great job on showing the feelings of so many people. It is a job well done.

[PoeT4994]

Nice yo. See...man...you had it in you. Yo, keep writing...I wanna be going against you at Brave New Voices next year!!!

[Gandré]

eloquent, good write, I liked it.

[Romeion Case]

That was pretty awesome. Could tell that it obviously came from somwhere deep. keep 'em coming. :-)

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Interesting. Words and physical being. Interesting way to describe the workings between body and thought, or more as the torture. Very nice. I love your descriptions

[JustJordan. x3]

i love this! it's amazingg.!

[Victoria Thornton]

F**k yeah!!! Love it!!!

[Mistaken]

This is amazing..it captures what people don't realize...I like it :)

[Taylor H.]

this is really good. I can sadly say that I have gone through 8 years of verbal abuse from my step-mother. Everything is ok now but this is really good.