A Very Sad Love Song

A Very Sad Love Song

A Poem by Xia
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Maybe I'll be fine. Then again, maybe not. Maybe I'll never move on. Maybe I'll just keep living...a very sad love song.

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 She said, “Sit down, let’s have a talk.”

And I knew something was horribly wrong
She said, “Look, Drew…” and gave me that look
And I felt like in the background they were playing that song
 
That song where the singers sings
About a broken heart
A love so good but then crumbles
Can we go back to the start?
 
She said, “I think we should break up.”
And I felt my heart break in two, maybe more
She said, “I found someone else.”
And I knew I lost what to live for
 
I lived for her, and her alone
Why did she do this to me?
I loved no one else but her
Why couldn’t she see?
 
She said, “It hurts me to.”
What a lie
She said, “But I think it’s for the best”
Is this really how she’s going to say goodbye?
 
At least look at me in the eyes
Tell me one more time
That you love me
And maybe I’ll be fine
 
Then again, maybe I won’t
Maybe I’ll never move on
Maybe I’ll just keep living
A very sad love song
 
She said, “Goodbye.”
She said, “He’s waiting for me.”
 
And I said, “Goodbye, my love.”
She shut the door
Leaving me all alone this empty place
I opened my mouth and screamed her name
Filling this empty space
 
Maybe I’ll be fine
Then again, maybe I won’t
Maybe I’ll never move on
Maybe I’ll just keep living
A very sad love song

© 2008 Xia


Author's Note

Xia
It's not music lyrics. I'm not that good. XD But I welcome any comments and criticism. Poetry is not my strongt point so I like to know what people think.

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Maybe I'll be fine
Then again, maybe I won't
Maybe I'll never move on
Maybe I'll just keep living
A very sad love song

what a sad story of love lost and heartbreak...we have all been there from time to time. i could feel the pain and desolution of the one being left behind by the one he loved....

nicely written.

Amanda

Posted 15 Years Ago



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