not changeable

you,

you tried to change me,

you tried to look

you tried to see

you tried to love

you tried to tell

you looked for something that wasn't there

you tried to see a person who truly cared

you tried to love her, but she  wasn't there

you tried to tell her that you'd care, 

you looked in all the wrong places,

you'd thought you'd find something unreal,

you took to many paces,

she ~

she was there all along

she cared for you

she loved you truly

she tried to tell you

she was there from the start, but you looked passed her

she cared for you then , and cared for you know

she loved you truly, but you didnt see

she tried to tell to stop looking, but you were to determind

but then....

she saw it,

she saw you

she saw her

she saw the truth

you were searching for something that wasnt there

a girl who you thought could change

a rebound girl will a heart so strange

you thought you could change her

you tried to find the girl you once had,

well boy..

you wont find her,

not inside of me

i'm done with your games

what don't you see?

i have caught you in the act

please go and don't come back

ill never change for a boy

i'm not just some old toy

you tried to change me,

you did wrong

i am who i am,

now go,

run along!

Reviews

[victoria]

its how i truley feel bout someone...but its prob not true, its prob just my worries makeing me feel, feel like im a rebound girl

[sugar]

lmao boo i love you and your writing i hope this poem is true...

[Becky C Strukamp]

Well penned!!