Night Tease

Night Tease

A Poem by Xpressurself

Hot summer night


Watching  your body

You closing your eyes 


The  girl : The grass invites me out of the water and to the field I lay. Letting the warm summer air embrace my body


Your eyes searching me


The girl: My lips wet and full, eyes with a pouting innocent look.


 You wonder

What words runs through his head now


The girl: What words indeed, Eyes pleading for knowledge, Tell me a whisper



Bodies so close

Feeling the heat of the skin

Small drops of water

Running down your belly


The girl: My chest rises in a sigh an ache of want and curiosity


Couldn't miss my eyes

You enjoy the magical touch


You do


 The girl: Quivering at your gaze licking my lips


Words start to slow down 

Bodies and souls


We craved for the intimacy for so long 


The girl:  What else do you crave?


Crave to touch you

Hold you closer

Feel your skin 

Kiss your lips


The girl: My lips that are still wet, pouting Inviting 


Closing  your eyes 

You enjoy the effect  

On me


The girl:

Feeling so close

Feeling vulnerable 

The water dripping down my breasts

And the breeze bringing on a slight chill 



I feel your heart 

As it beat faster under your skin

You breath 

Your eyes 

Your body 

Your love 

We couldn't ask for better connection

Poets love 


The young girl: Poets Inspiration, on a hot August night 


© 2017 Xpressurself

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Wow!! Amazing, beautiful, creative, very visual, it had my eyes glued to the screen.

Posted 1 Month Ago

You did make the heart beat faster and the morning sing for me. A beautiful muse you have. Very sensual yet with a tough of softness as a perfect romance should be. I really love the picture to go with it. Looking forward to more such romance!

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

Thank you , glad you love my words
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Months Ago

I just loved them. You are welcome.
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Your writing is indicative of an extremely romantic soul, more specifically one who has an appetite for sensuality. I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more. Keep posting.

Posted 3 Months Ago

(Micky) I express loathing to you for the stuff you write

Posted 3 Months Ago

reminds me of a conversation I had with a friend, about how sexting is the least romantic thing one can do; in reply, they sent me a poem quite similar to this. I loved the last line though, poets love (: I might be biased but I do think people who write have an incredible depth of emotion. I’m not gonna lie, these sorta poems usually aren’t my style but you really do have a way with words, especially in evoking emotion and I loved the two narratives! You made a typically crude "hubba hubba put ur dick in me" act into something reminiscent of the classic romance poems. Reminded me of Julia's Breasts, forget who that was by but it was written in the eighteenth century and I like it because it’s an entire published poem entitled Julia's breasts. Anyway sorry for rambling, point is I like your work (:

Posted 4 Months Ago

Alluring! sensual!.. drives ones imagination to mysterious captivity

Posted 7 Months Ago

Arousing and so passionate. Hot stuff. Need to go cool down now.

Posted 7 Months Ago


7 Months Ago

haha thank you

5 Months Ago

Wooooow very amazing
Sexual stuff..didnt understand much

Posted 8 Months Ago

I liked this different approach with both points of view described. The overall erotic and sensual feeling works well although I did find it a little difficult in places knowing who was thinking/speaking. As an example; your section -
The girl: My lips wet and full, eyes with a pouting innocent look.
You wonder
What words runs through his head now.
Should it be , 'I wonder'
That's easily worked out and it may just be me not picking up. It might also help to keep the bold text throughout for the girl.
That doesn't detract from your great original take on this old story!

Posted 9 Months Ago

wow!! Such Imagination for this... love it

Posted 9 Months Ago

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Added on November 16, 2017
Last Updated on November 16, 2017



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