Night Tease

Night Tease

A Poem by Xpressurself
"

Hot summer night

"



Watching  your body

You closing your eyes 

 

The  girl : The grass invites me out of the water and to the field I lay. Letting the warm summer air embrace my body

 

Your eyes searching me

 

The girl: My lips wet and full, eyes with a pouting innocent look.

 

 You wonder

What words runs through his head now

 

The girl: What words indeed, Eyes pleading for knowledge, Tell me a whisper

 

 

Bodies so close

Feeling the heat of the skin

Small drops of water

Running down your belly

 

The girl: My chest rises in a sigh an ache of want and curiosity

 

Couldn't miss my eyes

You enjoy the magical touch

Finally

You do

 

 The girl: Quivering at your gaze licking my lips

 

Words start to slow down 

Bodies and souls

Closer 

We craved for the intimacy for so long 

 

The girl:  What else do you crave?

 

Crave to touch you

Hold you closer

Feel your skin 

Kiss your lips

 

The girl: My lips that are still wet, pouting Inviting 

 

Closing  your eyes 

You enjoy the effect  

On me

 

The girl:

Feeling so close

Feeling vulnerable 

The water dripping down my breasts

And the breeze bringing on a slight chill 

 

Finally, 

I feel your heart 

As it beat faster under your skin

You breath 

Your eyes 

Your body 

Your love 

We couldn't ask for better connection

Poets love 

 

The young girl: Poets Inspiration, on a hot August night 

 


© 2017 Xpressurself



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I liked this different approach with both points of view described. The overall erotic and sensual feeling works well although I did find it a little difficult in places knowing who was thinking/speaking. As an example; your section -
The girl: My lips wet and full, eyes with a pouting innocent look.
You wonder
What words runs through his head now.
Should it be , 'I wonder'
That's easily worked out and it may just be me not picking up. It might also help to keep the bold text throughout for the girl.
That doesn't detract from your great original take on this old story!
Cheers,
Alan

Posted 1 Week Ago


wow!! Such Imagination for this... love it

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


steamy. way to entice your readers!!!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Wow!!I'm really fan of Ur imagery.. wonderful poem and picture too

Posted 1 Month Ago


You put so much description that i could it imagine it, impressive.

Posted 1 Month Ago


i really like this. Great images.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Interesting, love how you put both perspective, the way we act around someone and what we feel in the insides. Good job.

Posted 1 Month Ago


There seemed to be a battle between emotions and "the girl's" inner narrative. It was a bit difficult for me to figure out the perspective of this; but the balance, dance even, between sensations of the flesh and intimate details captured by the mind was very interesting.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Absolute gem!! You have a beautiful talent

Posted 1 Month Ago



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