Black and white all is right.

                            What’s with the fuss?

                        Black and white all is right.

                It’s what defines our day and our night.

                  How could a day not be so right huh!,

                   Don’t you like day light, yes you do.

How could a night be the opposite, don’t you enjoy sleeping mmmh relaxed,

                Just the goodtime for bodies to become spirits,

           When one ignites the other, turning liquids into breathe.

       White turns the darkest day into bright light and fulfills our might

           However if our might is not fulfilled it shall be dimmed

                     Into that which will fulfill our might

                                  the night.

Reviews

[Oyindamola Shoola]

you have made use of good comparison between black and white and day and night...kudos

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. I'm half Ojibwa. The Native Americans believe we need the four colors of the world to act as one. One people and one planet. I like how you used the night and the day. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frontier]

Very interesting theme, I'm all for the night! I also like how you are not afraid to use a free structure.

[Pryde Foltz]

We are all shades of light and dark. Wonderful poem.

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

I enjoyed it. Idk why but I felt the "dont you like sleeping?" Like to be a bit lazy compared to the rest of the poem. Good poem.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

i get you taylor, and it amkes sense to me now, thanks.

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

no problem :)

[Rishabh Arora]

:) simple yet meaningful. Poetry in true sense :)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

am glad you tink so man

[Emily]

I like the meaning of this poem! Good job Sibusiso!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx , emily

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

indeed it is peaceful, thanx man

[Moswane Mafule Morlan]

"The future is bright, and it is peaceful. The end is glorious. The only dark and gloom period is the intervening period, but it finds its glory in the act of struggle."-Oliver Reginal Tambo

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

we remain holistically pinned to the word.