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Mud

Mud

A Poem by Xuru

I don't recognize my own voice, the lump in my throat grows.
My spine curves to the sharp bends in the road.

Dead end.

She won't love me forever.

© 2017 Xuru



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VERY AWESOME...really good write. love the emotions.

Posted 6 Months Ago


(applauds) Dude, this is amazing!!! The depth sends a shiver down my spine.

Posted 8 Months Ago


*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

My own spine practically made me wince in pain from the pressure of this write... A dead end, perhaps... Who is that stranger in the mirror... A powerful invocation of demented-self...

Posted 8 Months Ago


Xuru

8 Months Ago

I'm not very good, not sure what I can bring to your group.

Looking forward to parti.. read more
Silente

8 Months Ago

Well... I shan't argue with you, but you are good enough to earn a gold star in my book...! Hah
Not every road dead ends. Take another road and write about it's beginning. It made me think!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Xuru

8 Months Ago

It does for me.
Bonnie Paige

8 Months Ago

Your picture makes me think you are very young and a long life ahead of you. Many roads to travel b.. read more
I love how this poem is simple but so effective and filled with emotion. You really grasp the idea of love and how things never last forever and I really really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Xuru

8 Months Ago

Glad you got something out of it.
Wow this is a very long poem I must say filled with emotions keep it up now

Posted 10 Months Ago


Xuru

8 Months Ago

More like short but thanks.
This short write, encourages me to read more, if there were so... it has so much potential. i loved it Xuru. Keep up the great penning.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Xuru

10 Months Ago

I always wanted to add more, but I think brevity works as well.
Love intoxicated inspired a poem like this, aptly titled n well spoken.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Xuru

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the nice words.
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Suchita

10 Months Ago

beautiful poem I thought it to be
Pefect dual image of physical and metaphorical dead end captures the grief of a broken relationship.Like the sharp bends and spine curves.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Xuru

10 Months Ago

Thank you fisher.
AnyONE who writes so coherently can do what's best in personal life, you know. Perhaps you need take another 'driving test'.. learn to see a way forward with more hope and trust in yourself. Your finely written, emotional poem - though short, provides answers that i suspect you already know!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Xuru

10 Months Ago

"Hope" is something I definitely need more of haha.

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Added on February 18, 2017
Last Updated on July 7, 2017
Tags: Love, story, short, poem, life, depression, mental, illness

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Xuru
Xuru

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