Mud

Mud

A Poem by Xuru

I don't recognize my own voice, the lump in my throat grows.
My spine curves to the sharp bends in the road.

Dead end.

She won't love me forever.

© 2017 Xuru



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(applauds) Dude, this is amazing!!! The depth sends a shiver down my spine.

Posted 1 Month Ago


*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

My own spine practically made me wince in pain from the pressure of this write... A dead end, perhaps... Who is that stranger in the mirror... A powerful invocation of demented-self...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

I'm not very good, not sure what I can bring to your group.

Looking forward to parti.. read more
Silente

1 Month Ago

Well... I shan't argue with you, but you are good enough to earn a gold star in my book...! Hah
Not every road dead ends. Take another road and write about it's beginning. It made me think!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

It does for me.
Bonnie Paige

1 Month Ago

Your picture makes me think you are very young and a long life ahead of you. Many roads to travel b.. read more
I love how this poem is simple but so effective and filled with emotion. You really grasp the idea of love and how things never last forever and I really really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

Glad you got something out of it.
Wow this is a very long poem I must say filled with emotions keep it up now

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

More like short but thanks.
This short write, encourages me to read more, if there were so... it has so much potential. i loved it Xuru. Keep up the great penning.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

3 Months Ago

I always wanted to add more, but I think brevity works as well.
Love intoxicated inspired a poem like this, aptly titled n well spoken.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the nice words.
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Suchita

3 Months Ago

beautiful poem I thought it to be
Pefect dual image of physical and metaphorical dead end captures the grief of a broken relationship.Like the sharp bends and spine curves.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

3 Months Ago

Thank you fisher.
AnyONE who writes so coherently can do what's best in personal life, you know. Perhaps you need take another 'driving test'.. learn to see a way forward with more hope and trust in yourself. Your finely written, emotional poem - though short, provides answers that i suspect you already know!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

3 Months Ago

"Hope" is something I definitely need more of haha.
This is beautiful and honest, so great.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

3 Months Ago

I'm glad you liked it.

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Added on February 18, 2017
Last Updated on July 7, 2017
Tags: Love, story, short, poem, life, depression, mental, illness

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