Mud

Mud

A Poem by Xuru

I don't recognize my own voice, the lump in my throat grows.
My spine curves to the sharp bends in the road.

Dead end.

She won't love me forever.

© 2017 Xuru



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Wow this is a very long poem I must say filled with emotions keep it up now

Posted 1 Month Ago


This short write, encourages me to read more, if there were so... it has so much potential. i loved it Xuru. Keep up the great penning.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

I always wanted to add more, but I think brevity works as well.
Love intoxicated inspired a poem like this, aptly titled n well spoken.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the nice words.
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Suchita

1 Month Ago

beautiful poem I thought it to be
Pefect dual image of physical and metaphorical dead end captures the grief of a broken relationship.Like the sharp bends and spine curves.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

Thank you fisher.
AnyONE who writes so coherently can do what's best in personal life, you know. Perhaps you need take another 'driving test'.. learn to see a way forward with more hope and trust in yourself. Your finely written, emotional poem - though short, provides answers that i suspect you already know!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

"Hope" is something I definitely need more of haha.
This is beautiful and honest, so great.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you liked it.
this is painfully perfect...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Xuru

1 Month Ago

Why thank you!
It's beautiful, in a smog filled greasy sky kind of way. pessimistic poetry is ironically one of the most real kinds left. hardcore self doubt and I hope you have more confidence Away from keyboard than the portrayal in the text.


Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

2 Months Ago

Oddly enough I wouldn't consider myself a pessimist as my writing suggests.
London

1 Month Ago

That's good! Stay rad, this is some great text :)
Sounds like self doubt and being afraid to commit because of it

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

2 Months Ago

Yes ma'am.
I enjoy poetry with possibility and this checks that box. It's got grimy intrigue. Your title fits the content as well. I really like this piece. Great work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Xuru

2 Months Ago

Thank you Duff.
duff

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome.

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Added on February 18, 2017
Last Updated on July 7, 2017
Tags: Love, story, short, poem, life, depression, mental, illness

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