I'm done

I'm done

A Poem by ♪Kinnixk ♫

You say you’re there for me

when you’re not.

You say you love me

when you don’t.

I call you

You didn’t call me back.

You say I’m the only one

I know I’m not.

I never was, was I?

She was always there for you

And you were always there for her.

I was in a dark corner

All this time

And I thought I actually liked you.

I thought you actually cared.

But you don’t.

You never did.

What does she have that I don’t?

Do you think I’m that stupid?

Do you think I wouldn’t notice

the way you kept talking about her?

You told me it was my fault

You sent those emails

Those made me want to punch you repeatedly.

I can’t believe I shed a tear from the breakup

After all the lies

Sneaking

Cheating

I saw the pattern too late

It’s happened so many times.

I can’t trust it anymore.

I’m done with it.

I’m done with love

I want nothing to do with it.


© 2012 ♪Kinnixk ♫



Author's Note

♪Kinnixk ♫
I really wanted to add the guy's name to this but I think it'll come back and bite me in the ass so I made do without it.

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If a guy hurt you like this, he doesn't deserve you. Trust me. I've been in your position. Broke up with a guy and bawled for the whole day, until my friend hacked his phone and found all his emails and sexual texts to not just one other girl, but three. I found myself wanting to give up on love and all that, but it is worth it to go back. Trust me.

Posted 11 Months Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

maria♫♪

7 Months Ago

the same thing happened to one of my friends


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I love this poem. I love the colors added. I've felt like this too, I gave up on guys and thought I was a lesbian, but then the right guy showed up and we are now married. your right guy should show up too.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hate betrayal and cheaters. Well, I personally have never been cheated upon. (Don't have time for girlfriends) but I can tell it sucks. Don't worry, I am sure you'll find your prince charming soon. Not all guys are a$$holes.

P.S. Voices in my head tell me to tell you... You should kick the crap out of that cheater.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's one way to write a guy out of your life. Nice work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♪Kinnixk ♫

5 Months Ago

Thanks ^.^
guys suck and everything you wrote happens to 99% of girls there will be someone out there better for you who will treat you right

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sasha Moser

5 Months Ago

I guess I could say the same thing about girl, because I am sure guys aren't the only cheaters. :D
steffa206

5 Months Ago

well i know that but i dont cheat and most guys get around girls want love and romance guys want oth.. read more
♪Kinnixk ♫

5 Months Ago

I kinda agree because that's all that happened to me during my relationships. :/
very nice....and this is sadly seen everywhere and almost everyone that deserves this the least has gone through it...stay strong :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A guy never will understand a girl's feelings, but if they didn't think we girls would figure out that we were being cheated on then they are stupid. No person deserves to be cheated on nor hurt by anyone...girl or guy. I can relate to this poem. I'm going through this with my friend, but I'm glad we aren't dating...cause it would make it complicated, but we are good friends, but he isn't treating me equally...I am there for him when he needs me, but he's not there for me when I need him. I really hope that you never give up on love because one day you will find the right person for you. That will keep you happy and make you feel special. I loved the emotions in this...thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha. Wow. I'm sorry that this happened to you. But I really like this poem. :) I hope you feel better now, writing usually helps. :)
Elliott Zettel


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♪Kinnixk ♫

9 Months Ago

It did help me get over him. thank you ^.^
this is awesome ....
hmmm...definitely that guy doesn't deserve you...he didn't notice that you're a diamond in the rough...;)great job..

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your anger and frustration have been depicted vividly in your poem.
There might not be any better expression whatsoever to treat a cheat like this person you have targeted.
The world now knows that he is unfaithful.
Great write.
Congratulations!!!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One word: Amazing And it most likely would have bit you. And another thing, NEVER give up on love.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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