Remembering Him Now

This is a poem that I wrote right after my boyfriend broke up with me

Remembering him now
tears come to her eyes
she thinks tough it up
its just for one night

Remembering him now
She thinks of her past
Where he'd kiss her so sweetly
Not knowing its her last

Remembering him now
with his breathe on her neck
the look on his face
both cheeks are now wet

Remembering him now
She stares at the phone
All this hurt and this anger
Shes never felt so alone

Remembering him now
With that look in his eyes
Saying ill be there forever
Not knowing it was lies

Remembering him now
she can no longer swallow
the pain and the suffering
and the feeling so hallow

Remembering him now
The tears falling down
All she needs is a rest
She cant stand the sound

Remembering him now
she says shes done
no games to be played
she hoped he had fun

Remembering him now
His voice ringing through her head
She thinks to herself
Im better off dead

Remembering him now
she sees the scars on her wrist
all from her cries
and the pain of his kiss

Remembering him now
she gets her self together
because we all know
it will never get better

Remembering him now
The world is so weary
How many did she take?
She cant see so clearly

Remembering him now
She whispers to me
It'll all get better
Cant you just see?

Remembering him now
She looks at the time
Her eyes keep on sinking
Its to far to climb

Remembering him now
She washes away her sorrow
It was all she could take
Shell be gone by tomorrow

Remembering him now
she takes her last breath
cause he was all she had
and now it he, who is her death

Author's Note

I'm sorry about any grammar problems, and what do you think?

Reviews

[Madds]

Once again - really good. XD

[Aurora Lynn]

Wow. Great poem. So very powerful, I loved every second of it. I could FEEL the emotion coming through the words. Very well done!
~Aurora

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

This is very sad... But I think it is a great write and full of emotion ^^

[xyourfacex]

:( i find that to much painful to read... i've felt all way to much the same...

[Scisenheart]

thats so good, i was actually getting abit teary! :/ its fantasticly writen, i love the repitition and how it emphasises that he is all she can think of. i hope your well over him, becasuse anyone who writes as good as this deserves someone better(but if they did they would have nothing to write about, that is the infernal paradox of poetry)
Scisenheartxx :D

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Oh My Goodness this is so bitterly touching
and so heart tugging! This is a very well written write.