Gods and Goddesses: Earthen Souls

This is purposely everyone's POV. When the Prologue said "To hear hers, is to hear everyone's" was literal XD! I'll return reviews when I can (I have other things to read on other sites), as long as it's not short and simple because... it's annoying when I give a critique and I get this small thing in return and things x.x.

The first chapter was really... really, wordy, maybe so overly wordy it was annoying but... I don't know, I get reaaaally lost when writing and then everything comes out wordy and I'm going :Ehhh O.O!?: Sorry.

I update this daily so... And, I'm still young and naive so I will take any criticism ya throw at me... sometimes I catch it with my face.. but it's still catching. ^-^