The Fallen Tree

The Tree ( having human traits)...could not overcome his pride...

The Fallen Tree

Dust sliding over the woods

didn't had a clue about the tree's moods.

Known as the Fallen tree,

who was infamous even in the Caspian sea.

Story goes back in the ancient time,

back then almost everything was fine.

There used to be a self righteous tree

who would stand tall ,

when others wold fall.

But he would never give a hand to those in needs

instead wold just have a laugh when their soul's would bleed

But as Lady Fate chose ,

it was time for him to get his due blows

Slowly and gradually he became crooked

nobody was there for him as far as he looked

he still feels like sour grapes

wishing he hadn't made those mistakes

And as he remains in the fallen club ,

he always hopes maybe one day someone would wake him up.

Author's Note

I just want to say one thing that I was feeling like while writing this : sometimes you must swallow your pride and by giving hand to others...you are enlightening yourself. :D

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Powerful... I loved those last two lines... Keep it up! :D

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Sure...Always..Thanq..! :D

[2BIGPAC]

You always do epic stuff , and this time......TOO!!!!
Whenever you come back after a break you are always better than ever...excellent job..in the shelf...

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Thanks a ton , again ...it makes heart so full whenever you say things like that...;)

[MENEMJZ]

Where were you all these days :O missed you man !
WoW amazingly and brilliantly written you man !
Salute to you Boy !

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Wooo..you always like my stuff man...you're too kind...:)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Well penned...the flow was just superb...rhyming was excellent..the theme ofcourse brilliant in itself... :)

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Honured...:D