Cool as glass

Cool as glass

A Story by Anya
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For a contest :)

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I looked around the room. Nothing seemed unusual, but then I caught sight of myself in the mirror hanging above the fireplace. Something wasn't right. I moved closer. The mirror had been hanging in an antique shop when my parents found it. They love old things like mismatched chairs, old, beaten wooden doors and ... and mirrors. Personally, I think it's really ugly. It has a horrible dark green frame that reminds me of poison. It's also the way it feels. Like ice... always like ice. I examaned my reflection carefully. I could tell something was wrong with it but... but... I took a step closer, my breath misting up the cool surface slightly. Suddenly I saw it. I drew in breath sharply. My eyes... my eyes were red.  Swallowing I took a step back. My eyes were red. I reached my hands up and lightly traced the rim of each eye, watching the figure in the glass do the same. How could my eyes turn from blue to red? I looked around the room again, my vision seemed normal. I turned back to the mirror then screamed. My reflection wasn't there. It wasn't there.... I backed away from the fireplace. My heart was racing, my blood pounding in my ears. What was wrong with me? I ran over to the phone and fumbled with it before picking it up and dialing my mum's number. I could feel cold sweat trickling down my back.

"Hello?"

"Mum... I think i'm going mad, I-"  the phone went dead "Mum?" I whispered.

 

That was when I felt a touch on my back, ice cold... like glass... like mirror...

© 2009 Anya


Author's Note

Anya
my spelling is a bit dodgy as is my grammar, i'm 13 :)

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Congratulations for winning the Writer's Nook contest! You are a talented thirteen-year-old!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Jen
Very nice. I like the suspense. This feels like it could be a longer piece, but it works as it is. Still makes me want to read more. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Anya ,what a spine tingling write!! It had me on the edge
of my seat from the beginning to the eerie, scary end.
Well done Anya! Thank you for submitting this awesome
write to my contest! ~ Helena :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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