Hidden Treasure

the dreadful beauty of the desert treasure pausing

softly, the chaos crystal with the scheming beast

heaven's symbol hates war, the forest burns

hidden mourning imagine that sweet aroma voice

listen and imagine the treasured chaos once masked

the bright sadness waters the air until everything is faded

until nothing is left

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think

Reviews

[manifesto]

I love how it slowly unravels. I agree with SaimaS that the message is slightly unclear, but it stirs up some mysterious emotion that only the subconscious mind can understand (which is awesome).

hmmm. i'm not sure i completely understand some lines. however if u are trying to simply form a feeling here, then it has worked! :>