Don Quixote

Don Quixote

A Poem by Yahallo
"

One-sided and impossible. What do I even want? Friends should be happy for their friends.

"
he's a friend. 
a funny, cheerful, 
warm, and kind friend. 
somehow, he's my friend too. 

i don't feel anything rose-coloured for him. 
i make myself believe.
i have to. otherwise, well,
i'd create a triangle. 

i wish i had never walked down 
this one-way street. 
if i turn back now, i'll be crushed. 
forgotten. 

his touch tastes bittersweet. 
like eve in the garden, 
i forget he's a forbbiden fruit,
that i'll never ever have.

© 2018 Yahallo


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i like the way you relate the poem to don quixote because of his funny and cheerful ways and his simple ideas on life. I know how you feel regarding the triangle aspect, i have had that for a while with my best friend and his wife. it hurts at first but then there will come a time that there is acceptance that it is a different thing with you though i like the last stanza...
his touch tastes bittersweet.
like eve in the garden,
i forget he's a forbbiden fruit,
that i'll never ever have.... yes to avoid confusion and a wrong thing but then sometimes emotion overflows that logic is set aside. this i can fully understand. thanks for a wonderful piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yahallo

6 Years Ago

Haha, yeah, Quixote tried to fight impossible things.

It's a weird combination of fee.. read more
sette

6 Years Ago

i remember him and his horse whom he considers more than an animal but a friend. you are very much w.. read more



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i like the way you relate the poem to don quixote because of his funny and cheerful ways and his simple ideas on life. I know how you feel regarding the triangle aspect, i have had that for a while with my best friend and his wife. it hurts at first but then there will come a time that there is acceptance that it is a different thing with you though i like the last stanza...
his touch tastes bittersweet.
like eve in the garden,
i forget he's a forbbiden fruit,
that i'll never ever have.... yes to avoid confusion and a wrong thing but then sometimes emotion overflows that logic is set aside. this i can fully understand. thanks for a wonderful piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yahallo

6 Years Ago

Haha, yeah, Quixote tried to fight impossible things.

It's a weird combination of fee.. read more
sette

6 Years Ago

i remember him and his horse whom he considers more than an animal but a friend. you are very much w.. read more

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Added on March 23, 2018
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