Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by YanZeros
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Bohemian Love (3/5)

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A subtle calm weather of December

In long nights waiting in silence was saved

By pure innocent face in deep slumber

Whispers goodnight my dearly beloved


Simple words of care guiding you to dreams

Humming lullabies in sweet melody

Holding close keeping you safe in my arms

Sheltering you to sleep well carelessly


Delve into dreams where fantasies are made

You’re the maker the captain of your ship

Set sail to clouds and live to tell the tale

Of new horizon only you can grasp


Hush; sleep tight sweet dreams my little angel

When the daylight comes I’ll kiss you with smile



 


© 2016 YanZeros



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YanZeros
reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

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"You’re the maker the captain of your ship

Set sail to clouds and live to tell the tale"

Very strong lines here, my favorite.
I felt the poem expressed the motherly love and affection. She sings the child lullaby, hold it close in her arm in warmth and affection. A very sweet poem expressed in simplicity.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

sending good vibrations :) xD
The dark story

1 Year Ago

Thanks thanks. I need that for exams :)
YanZeros

1 Year Ago

you're welcome and thank you too!



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"You’re the maker the captain of your ship

Set sail to clouds and live to tell the tale"

Very strong lines here, my favorite.
I felt the poem expressed the motherly love and affection. She sings the child lullaby, hold it close in her arm in warmth and affection. A very sweet poem expressed in simplicity.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

sending good vibrations :) xD
The dark story

1 Year Ago

Thanks thanks. I need that for exams :)
YanZeros

1 Year Ago

you're welcome and thank you too!
This made me think about a sweet love on a cold December day. I really love this poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Hi! Gullia King :) Thank you very much! I'm delighted that this poetry brought you back to your good.. read more
"Hush; sleep tight sweet dreams my little angel
When the daylight comes I’ll kiss you with smile'
These lines made me smile.. Does that really happens in real life? I mean this is a bit dreamy right? But i loved to read this.. You portray the romantic emotions romantically! Good work :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Hi! Yumna :D thank you for your reviews! :) Glad you liked it! I would say... YES! expressing affect.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Err right 😂
You are welcome ☺

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