I’ll Stay

I’ll Stay

A Poem by YanZeros
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Bohemian Love (5/5)

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The Door shuts without noise


Droplets dampens the ground


Swallowed by the dark





Is this the end? Or is this just the beginning?


Holding on to that promise we made


Only I could do is bid her happiness





I’ll Stay,





If this thing is also called love, then it’s only has begun. 






Thank you for following the Mini Five Poem Series of  "Bohemian Love" Have a good time!

I - Bonfire

II - Beholder

III - Dreams

IV - Love Isn't A Game (A Poetry Game with YumnaKay)

V - I'll Stay



© 2017 YanZeros



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Sometimes, if you really love someone then you have to let them go. Holding on when they don't want you to would just be selfishness - the opposite of love.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

2 Months Ago

Thank you, I'm glad this can be interpreted that way.
I think this is selfless love. The kind where you don't care for what you want but to make the other one happy...
I love your starting 3 lines. Really leaves a picture in the mind's eye...
Well penned.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

2 Months Ago

Thank you, hehe finally I'm able to close "Bohemian Love" with this lousy poem. Sometimes using only.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Yes, I did notice that ;) and hey no it's def not lousy at all!
I agree. Simpler words make .. read more

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