Lola Nina

J.R.W. 2/5

I don’t know why I’m having this strange feeling

Maybe because it has been a long time since I came to visit this place

It makes me wonder why?

I saw you alone sitting behind the tricycle’s passenger seat

It’s weird…

The day has ended without saying a word to you

Even our eyes never met

Although I am glad to see you like you never grow old.

 

 

Three full moons has passed

I came back again, 

Shocked! coz’ I just learned you were already gone

You were bedridden during the time I saw you

I had no idea what has happened to you...

I will never forget you Lola Nina,
You are an Angel to me.

Thank you for seeing us home again.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

'Thank you for seeing us home again'. What a lovely way to end this poem, so full of heart-felt feeling.
Nicely done.

[YanZeros]

Thank you Great Aunt Astri =) ^^

[J. J. Nightingale]

A fond farewell to love
Hearts aglow
can never forget..

..♥.. Jazzy

[YanZeros]

Thank you Jazzy ^^

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome..... :)...............

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind words and memories shared in the story. You made the reader feel your thought and your emotions. Thank you my friend for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[YanZeros]

Thank you Sir! ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.