Lola Nina

Lola Nina

A Poem by YanZeros

J.R.W. 2/5


I don’t know why I’m having this strange feeling

Maybe because it has been a long time since I came to visit this place

It makes me wonder why?

I saw you alone sitting behind the tricycle’s passenger seat

It’s weird…

The day has ended without saying a word to you

Even our eyes never met

Although I am glad to see you like you never grow old.



Three full moons has passed

I came back again, 

Shocked! coz’ I just learned you were already gone

You were bedridden during the time I saw you

I had no idea what has happened to you...

I will never forget you Lola Nina,
You are an Angel to me.

Thank you for seeing us home again.

© 2017 YanZeros

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'Thank you for seeing us home again'. What a lovely way to end this poem, so full of heart-felt feeling.
Nicely done.

Posted 9 Months Ago


9 Months Ago

Thank you Great Aunt Astri =) ^^
A fond farewell to love
Hearts aglow
can never forget..

..♥.. Jazzy

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Thank you Jazzy ^^
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Year Ago

You are welcome..... :)...............
Kind words and memories shared in the story. You made the reader feel your thought and your emotions. Thank you my friend for sharing your words and thoughts.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Thank you Sir! ^^
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Added on September 8, 2017
Last Updated on December 7, 2017



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