A Coward’s Affection

A Coward’s Affection

A Poem by YanZeros
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Tomorrow’s never promised

Here you are always shows a smile

Every time our eyes meet.

Since then, I kept and treasured a Secret

Sitting by your side in 5th grade room.

 

 

Drawn to you in far distance

Average and Sophisticated

In a hallway of crowds

Seeing only you

Y… am I too late to notice?

 

 

Regret? I do probably will.

Unprepared and Uninformed

Bringing out the courage

Expressing this abstract feeling

Like a fool in the night swings waiting

I snatched to hold your hand

Exalted! But, there’s no sting. Maybe, it’s not it?

 

 

Coiling down under the summer atmosphere

On a bench waiting to be called

Wandering glances having an empty head.

Allured by a silky straight hair, cute nose and tall yellowish-tan girl

Ramp the aisle as I froze to see a glimpse of her face.

Due time I realized that, I am a Coward.

© 2017 YanZeros


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I think most guys are very cowardly when it comes to approaching some lady they are attracted to or interested in. You've captured the way this might feel in the guy's head & I especially love the nighttime playground imagery, as it brings back memories of swinging in similar circumstances (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

6 Years Ago

Thank you Margie! ^^ coz' its a true story about the 3 girls I encountered in the early chapters of .. read more



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Aww this reminds me of the crush I had on a boy in my classroom too. "...in a hallway of crowds seeing only you" summed it up perfectly!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

5 Years Ago

Thank you Mari' Emeraude ^^
I think most guys are very cowardly when it comes to approaching some lady they are attracted to or interested in. You've captured the way this might feel in the guy's head & I especially love the nighttime playground imagery, as it brings back memories of swinging in similar circumstances (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

6 Years Ago

Thank you Margie! ^^ coz' its a true story about the 3 girls I encountered in the early chapters of .. read more
Old wise saying. You regret what you didn't do more then the bad endings. I liked and I understood this poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sir ^^
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Sometimes we do turn out to be cowards, yeah... some affections are just that, only to be kept hidden in the heart, never spilled...
A wistful write. Nice to read you again, Ricco :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

6 Years Ago

^^ thanks!
Oh... some women do seem unapproachable ..
Don't feel as a coward... maybe you are shy..

Interesting Thoughts..

Jazzy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

6 Years Ago

^^ thanks Jazzy! ^^
J. J.  Nightingale

6 Years Ago

You are welcome................ Jazzy

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