Such Love

Inspired by my love.

"Such Love"

Paganism taught me

to use crystals

but I've never seen one

with such colors

and depth

as his eyes

Buddhism taught me

to be kind

but I've never seen

such compassion

as the one he offers others

all the time

Atheism taught me

to question

but I've never seen

such curiosity

as the way he

explores like a child

Christianity taught me

to be loving

but I've never felt

such love

as the one he brings

to my life

YG

Author's Note

Thank you for reading :-) I would love to read your feedback!

Reviews

[Jade]

so very nicely written, like the wisdom in this piece

[Chris]

"Blessed Be".

"Nam Myōhō Renge Kyō" marked many paths.

With great fear so many God(s) appear.

Christ TOOK His bullet - would we?

We live what we truly seek...

with you I sooo agree.

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom shared in your words. I have been studying religion, belief and nature for 50 years. I'm 1/2 Ojibwa. I stayed with my Ojibwa Grandmother belief. One earth and one people. I tell people. I walked the fault line in California. Constant moving earth and I saw the land rebirth of the land after the fire. We need nature more than she need us. She will survive. I enjoyed your thoughts. You made me think.
Coyote

[Taino]

Very creative. The imagery you developed to describe the one using the concepts of established beliefs, incredible. Using what’s unique about each one paints a vision of the dearest soul.

[Rye]

Very nicely done without any forcing of religion on anyone, This is what I call writing, enjoayble and nicely done.

[Yari Garcia]

Thank you for taking the time to read & review my writings :-)
Yari

[Rye]

Not a problem, just remember to send me some as well.

[Yari Garcia]

Sure thing. I opted out of RR and instead like to do review-for-review. It feels less one-sided that way.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Lovely to read.very touching.from the moment you thought of this it was destined to be enjoyed by people who read it

[SilverInk]

I adore this representation of different religions. Keep writing Yari!!

[Done]

I like this Yari. Very nice.