About You

Just a little poem for you :-)

Author's Note

Let me know your thoughts ^.^

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a playful poem with a childlike tone. I like the way you use many bright & dynamic words -- giggle, flutter, whisper, sparkle – these words bring a poem alive with imagination & also these words sound fun when reading them. This is what “SHOW” instead of tell is about . . . the words you choose SHOW the excitement you want to convey. Instead of saying: “I am excited” . . . you say: “I giggle, flutter, sparkle” and we can SEE how this makes the narrator feel. Excellent job packing your poem with lively fun (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Yari Garcia]

Thank you so much :-) Enjoy your weekend!
Yari

[H L Rose]

This is so cute! It’s light and giddy and simply fun to read like a little song someone hums while going about their day.

Glad to have read it!

[Chris]

A touching and knowingly teasing wordset...

[Yari Garcia]

I'm happy to hear this! Thank you so much for reading and commenting :-)

Yari

[Abraham Kureshi]

creative and refreshing, really enjoyed. Good work.
-GS

[Yari Garcia]

Thanks so much :-)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Eloquence and creativity
they radiate from the uniqueness of your words.
Amazing read, Yari!

[Yari Garcia]

Thank you :-) Have a great weekend!
Yari

[The Anathematic Error]

I love it. It is very meaningful and encouraging. I was having quite a sad day, but that helped to cheer me up. Keep up the good work, I hope the best for you.

[Yari Garcia]

I'm very happy to hear this ^.^ Thanks for the review.

Yari