YUM

;-) I mean, who doesn't love to do that??

Yari Garcia

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Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[GothGranny]

Hi Yari, I used to be a cake and cookie decorator, so your poem about sweets went close to home. You used great imagery. You're a great writer!

[Yari Garcia]

Oh, how fun! And thank you ^.^

[sette]

the sweetness of life can be compared to eating a pastry, the icing in itself provides the flow of life the creaminess is another delight to enjoy while savoring why life can be sweet at times.

[Tara Marie]

Playfully intimate...LOVE IT

[Alisa Js]

Very clever and full of fun..

Alisa

[Tiana]

Oh YUM! That's the best part and less calories 😉 Subtle yet sensual. Love it

[emmajoy]

Surely the delightful image belies the far more adult language in your poem... smiling at your subtlety and - cleverness!.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Is this like related to 9 and a half weeks or am I revealing my age? Sweet and sensual

[Yari Garcia]

Hey, '98 is not that long ago ;-) But no, I have never seen the movie. Interesting, though...