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A Poem by I'm Just me:)
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i can relate yay pecae love gods grace

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I scream,
I cry,
I fight,
I try,
 
But nothing gets better for me
in this twisted and very cruel world,
 
Of many people I am one who
is not a very lucky one,
 
So in this world
I will be bullied by many people
but in the end I will always have Gods grace,
 
From the time im born til
I die but if and when I do die
I will die in Gods grace.

© 2012 I'm Just me:)


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I like the thought and the strong ending. Life teaches us many things. Good to have faith and belief. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sad.... But touching. Nice to see that you have a fighting spirit!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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thanks for all the advice and lol i always do that i will fix it

Posted 12 Years Ago


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AK
Nice! Again please change the i into I

Posted 12 Years Ago


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