When you give away your heart
They will strive to tear it apart
When you try to give it your all
They will want to see you fall
When you rise from the ashes
On your back, you'll find their scratches
When you try to give them help
They will urge to hear you yelp
When you call them your dear friends
They will force you to dark dead ends...
Sounds like you are going through a rough time. Sometimes you just have to clean yourself off. Mend the wounds, and move on. I do wish this wasn't occuring to you as I know how it feels to have the world ganged up against you. I hope in the end you will rise above it all.
Sounds like you are going through a rough time. Sometimes you just have to clean yourself off. Mend the wounds, and move on. I do wish this wasn't occuring to you as I know how it feels to have the world ganged up against you. I hope in the end you will rise above it all.
. hmmm ... be cautious ... it's for a reason that the wise often say that we should be very discerning ... it is very easy to fall into the trap of someone pretending to be a best friend ... i have walked into it many times ... and i have seen a lot of people walk into it many times ... i'm glad you wrote this poem ... especially for those who are unable to identify the trap ... very well written ...
sometimes the influences around us are definetly not to our benefit~ it gets complicated especially when they are ones you consider to be friends~ you relate this very well in your poem~
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