A Poem by Viki Rachel

Dedicated to my beautiful mother.


My mother is a

Patient woman; I don't know

How it's possible.


My mother is a

Blue eyed, tender-heart woman.

Forgives all my sins.


My mother mostly

Stays tranquil when I do not.

Bears my behaviour.


I wish to one day--

I only HOPE to achieve--

Her wonderful grace.


© 2011 Viki Rachel

Author's Note

Viki Rachel
I admire and adore my mother.

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Definately know how you feel about acheiving the incredible person that your mother is. I try every day to be as strong as my mother. This one inspired me. I kind of want to write about my mother now.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Oh, did I mention I tried to make it into a Haiku?

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Viki Rachel
Viki Rachel

Dallas, TX

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