Night of Darkness

 

 

...Darkness of night
Nightmares decending
Creatures calling
Opening facades; pretending
Falling again, prawling
Fighting, clawing
Forever searching,
Screaming, painful sounds

 

Sounds painful, screaming
Searching forever,
Clawing, fighting,
prwling, again falling
Pretending; facades opening
Calling creatures
Decending nightmares
Night of darkness...

Reviews

[Marie]

wow, an awesome write.

[Jazzy]

I love how you how you did this, with the second stanza being the reverse of the first, but still making perfect sense. Watch out for typos, though, because I've caught at least one in each poem I've looked at so far.
:)

[Vitamin A]

This is raw and compelling. My favorite line is definitely "Opening facades; pretending"
I can relate to that so well.
:)

[Alyssa Dufresne]

Wonderful -- appeals to that darker, sadistic side of mine. Primarily because I just finished watching "Gremlins" and so I keep thinking about the guys getting ripped open.

Anywayz....

Especially love how the entire poem is reversed in the second stanza.

-Midnight

P.S. Love the music on your page.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow this was good and dark