Moved On

 

 

the easiest thing that I can see

would be to be completely forgiving

so, for tonight, that's how I'll be,

pretending you haven't done a thing to me

 

I've been pushed down many times before

I've pleased you till my mind was sore

I’d thought I would have something better in store...

Instead, I'm burned to the core

 

"You're the one for me, and you only."

I still remember that line you once said to me

 before it made me blindedly happy,

but now it makes me laugh at the things I couldn't see

 

in a week you'll have already moved on

and by tomorrow I'll be, gladly, dead

but this action's not for you; I'm glad you're gone!

I just need to erase your disgusting face from my head

 

so for tonight I'll stay here and fight

I'll let you yell, since you think its right

I'll let you think you're hurting me even more

but-finally!-between us, there's a closed door

 

<3

Reviews

[A poet's heart]

I love the 'closed door' bit, it's great and I rarely think about that side of love. Great poem, thanks!

[Bennett Logan]

Yeah, breaking up always sucks... But it happens for a reason, fortunately. Though I'm normally not a fan of "wear your heart on your sleeve" poetry, your poem held my attention through the end. Very raw emotions, very real thinking... Keep up the good work!

[barricade]

painful! can completely understand this one...how it feels...especially that "Closed Door"!!!

great work!!

regards
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