Good Bye Mama

This poem is about the loss of my mother..

Good Bye Mama...

Your flowing hair looked so nice...The way your skin was glowing in the light...I held your hands and you squeezed mine back....I wish I could have that day back...The red dress looked so nice...but in my heart it didn't feel right...I'm so hurt and heartbroken that you had to leave....Even though i'm only 14...There are so many things that I will never have back...and that's why I always ask God Why did you have to do that? Everyone says God only takes the best..but i wasn't ready to give mine up just yet...School is much harder without you here.. I wanted you here for my freshmen year...It's only been 5 months without you...but it feels like the pain of 1000 years Good Bye Mama....I love you R.I.P

Author's Note

sorry if it's not that great. Tell me what you think please.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Beautifully yet Tragically missed

Sad Read

Matthew

[Hannah]

This poem is heart wrenching. It's emotionally saturated and makes me dread the day I lose my mother. You make your readers feel something. That's all any writer ever tries to achieve. Very, very powerful.

[YourSin]

Thank you so much.

[Ua]

Very pure. Very lovely. You are at a very difficult age for this particular situation, it is good to see you writing about it. Thank you for sharing.

Ua

[YourSin]

Thank you very much.