The Overcoming

The Overcoming

A Poem by YourXArtist
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Steps to a life changing journey to a place where new beginnings come alive

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Different place, out of touch

Distant miles,oceans apart

When will this journey ever start?

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Looking back, or moving ahead

Steps between can be worth it all

Don't let go, don't want to fall

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 When standing still and out of place

When things collide, shift weight

It still mght not be too late

Looking forward to a new life

A place it all begins

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 Faded dreams,feeling lost, is overcome

No more to linger,hold on

Swallowed up, that's gone

A new present,future,life

Has begun


© 2010 YourXArtist



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You have a remarkable flow going on with this write and rhyme scheme. Enjoyable read. I really liked your last stanza the best.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks. and, I'll correct the errors also. I was kind of in a hurry when I typed this up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The words have a strange strength to them
apart from some missing I's in a couple of words.
It could look slightly better if you paced it equally but a large cap between the second and third paragraph
Eg)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


hmm I liked this...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2009
Last Updated on February 19, 2010
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Hey. My name is Courtney. I love to write, mainly poems. I am shy and I can speak my mind better through writing poems rather than through talking. I'm like and outcast pretty much, but it's ok I gue.. more..

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