Just 1 Summer

An old poem found in a notebook from my ninth grade year

Just one summer, not one year through.
A certain girl that I admire starts a heated ruse.
I broke a moral law, that they though wrong,
And so I started smoking for a way to stop.
All the racing thoughts, of unusual stock.
Turning me in to a monster with conviction
Named Johnny Hancock.

I'm the one who saw you, and claimed you,
That feeling you won,
When you kiss the one that you love
"So you'll wait for me?"
"Where the hell else am I to go?"

Author's Note

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Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You write here with an honest, gritty feel, and it does flow like a powerful lyric. Vivid and alive with the story.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

It's suppose to kinda be a pop-punk song. Just never finished it so i poemed it. lol

[loowzerX]

I like the style too. unique.

[Moonflower]

I like this style, its kind of nonchalant. The ending is bitter sweet. Very good writing, doll.