Let's Snort Sour Skittles

When I was in love. No drug pun intended, as you can see none of the content is drug related.

Me and you, Such fools...
We would do anything to get a moment alone,
Even if it meant going to your home,
And in the absence of your parents we dined.
Dined on our own dish of love with a side of lust.
Making love to you is a must.
And then after the deed was done,
We'd express our feelings and tell of our love,
Then as we heard the car pull up,
I quickly did the same for my pants.
There wasn't any time to dance,
And even though you put me in a trance,
I was out your back door incredibly fast.
Ran down the street to my own car,
Down the street...not far,
Fix my hair in the rear-view,
And I was gone, and so I flew.
Back to the real world.
Because when I'm with my girl
Man...you'd have to be there,
It's like nothing else matters,
I'm sorry I write about you and I,
But hey, see you tomorrow.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[loowzerX]

Original use of metaphor. wow. I love how you change it into something so meaningful and relatable.

[.]

This is amazing really! I like the metaphor usuage of skittles.
Like the rhyme scheme. Well writ!

[Moonflower]

This is so endearing, sentimental, a very casual touch, very relatable story. :) I like the style in which it is written.

[Poetic Shambles]

Good stuff man, liking the rhyming style. And boy oh boy have I been in those situations before, takes me back man so thanks for the memories.