Fighting Scars

Looking at myself through the eyes of someone who I was once very close to.

I'm the devil on your shoulder
You smile back but that look can't be colder
Not it's clear we're pretty low
I'm the raindrop while there you lay
You look at me as if I have destroyed the day
Now you go, I waited but you didn't even show

I'm the ripped hole in your new jeans
All you want to do is wake up from this bad dream
Now it's clear we're pretty low
I'm the regret in the morning
So much anger that you feel like roaring
Now you go, I waited but you didn't even show

I am sorry where I am is dark
Fight again, here comes another scar

I'm that teacher on the first day
Boys and girls can't stand , they all hate
Now it's clear we're pretty low
Pins and needles, that's what I am
You let people know that I was in your palm
Now you go, I waited but you didn't even show

I am sorry where I am is dark
Fight again, here comes another scar
What we had was good I can't let go
The least you could do is say hello

I'm that person that destroyed you
I can't explain 'cause no one even has a clue
Now it's clear we're pretty low
I'm that cold night in the Winter
All those memories, you chuck away like litter
Now you go, I waited but you didn't even show

I am sorry where I am is dark
Fight again, here comes another scar
What we had was good I can't let go
The least you could do is say hello

Everything will be just fine..

Author's Note

Tips or constructive criticism would be great. Thanks.

Reviews

[PIG-RHCP]

Written about 5 songs in the last few days, really enjoying it at the moment.
I'll take a look now.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome, I'll be keeping my eye on your future works, feel free to review mine if you want.

[PIG-RHCP]

Glad you liked it Thomas, great to finally get some feedback.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Slash at morality and grave decision, love the flow, narrative and complete lack of responsibility in prose. Hit home for points not usually dealt with in poetry, well done.