Death Conquers all

Death Conquers all

A Story by Hope

Owner of four mansions , sixteen luxury cars and a private jet
and yet he lay thirty inches deep ,
beside the man who had drowned struggling in the ocean of poverty.

© 2017 Hope



Author's Note

Hope
The above piece is an example of microfiction a.k.a. 'story in four lines.'

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Your words honest and true. Can't take your large house and wealth with you. More tears for a person who loved his children and the earth. Not money. Thank you hope for sharing your worthwhile words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hope

4 Days Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

You are welcome Hope.
This is very deep and thoughtful. Loved it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hope

4 Days Ago

Thank you very much!
Najam Us Saher

4 Days Ago

You're welcome.
Very insightful and a good moral as well, measured in life above most but laid to rest equal with every one else. Bravo! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
I have taken part in a few micro writing competitions they were set by the number of words you used. It is a great challenge to ones imagination and creativity as well as your writing skills. Welcome to Writers Cafe :~)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hope

4 Days Ago

Thanks a lot!
Very concise.

For microfiction, this sums up a story very well, though i think it should be layered as four lines, if that is what micro fiction requires. Just a thought.

Like your theme; that in death, every man is equal. No matter how rich or poor they were in life. Life is for living, and as they say, you can't take your money with you when you cease to be.

A thoughtful piece and a fine start to your cafe life. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hope

1 Month Ago

Thank you!

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Added on September 5, 2017
Last Updated on September 5, 2017
Tags: Death, equality, rich, poor, grave, luxury

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