Victoria

Victoria

A Poem by Cats Eye
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Dedicated to my baby sister, who I never get to see anymore.

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I remember when you were small
You were as bright as the midday sun
Your laugh was so adorable
You had no teeth but still loved to smile
 
I remember when you were small
Your hand fit in the palm of mine
Your were so sweet and innocent
You hand that mischievous glint in you eye
 
I remember when you were small
When I was crying you’d be there
Asking what was wrong
Making sure that you brought a smile to you big sisters face
 
I remember when you were small
We used to play video games
You would always manage to win
Even if you were only four
 
I remember when you were small
You used to wake me up in the morning
We’d go down and eat our breakfast together
And then sit and watch all you Disney movies together
 
I remember when you were small
You used to play with my hair
Put play make-up on me
And return my glasses to me with my lenses full of smudges
 
I remember when you were small
I got to hear your voice everyday
Now I get to here it only every now and then
When it’s time to get off the phone, its just so hard to let you go.

© 2008 Cats Eye


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very good makes me wish my sister and i could have that kind of relationship growing up but we didnt and now we r still trying to fill the space.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I never had a little sister or brother, but by reading this I can picture how it would have been :)
Very nice write, you're lucky to have a sister bond like that :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very sweet poem. Sisters are great, even if they're not always there. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can tell that your little sister is your world. Even if the two of you are apart, you're still connected. The two of you will meet again and that connect will still be there and will only grow stronger. Keep up the great work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the repetition in this and the sentiment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very loving and tender. Those phone calls can be so important, they ease the pain of separation a little bit at least.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so sweet! You sound like such an amazing sister! I hope you two get to see each other more

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet and beautiful and sad all in one, but a heartfelt write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this. Its so sweet and the repetition of I remember when you were small, Gives it alot of Distinction Good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Full of love and joyful memories, touching and captivating. I really enjoyed it. Great work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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