Courtney M.

This is dedicated to one of the best friends I could ever ask for.

 

We’ve been friends for so long

We’re practically sisters

When you hurt

I hurt

 

When something has gone amuck

I will be there for you to cry on my shoulder

As I know you’ll be there for me

So I can cry on your shoulder

 

You’re a rare diamond

In a field of beauty

You’re the one that I pick

Amongst all the rest

 

Your beauty

Is that of a rose

Your love for you friends and family

Is unyielding

 

Our friendship is far greater

Then anyone can see

For those who don’t get to know you

It’s their loss

 

With out you I am nothing

But dust in the wind

You are the one

Who keeps me here on solid ground

 

You are the greatest friend

A girl like me

Or any person

Could ever ask for

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You really wrote this so well for your friend. I really like the form and how some verses are shaped like diamonds. lol. This is so tender...
" You're a rare diamond
In a field of beauty
You're the one that I pick
Amongst all the rest"
...Your whole poem portrays your priceless gem of your friend so well.
Good luck in the "Forever Friend" contest!

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i can see how much you care about courtney. i love you. im happy your picking up on poetry. its a really great way to wright your thoughts when your on the run. really good poem.