Llama Drama

See the pics close up by clicking on the side pic , saw these llamas in a picture and they inspired yay.

This flesh 'n' blood cousin of the ship 'o' the desert
here is given that funky punky , stylish haircut?
Could it be optical illusion or screen manipulation
causing him to grin in mock jubilation?

And ain't he gonna toss those bangs
like some real groovy llama?
My doesn't he look ready for any
showbiz dromedary drama?

Ah yes, he does look handsome, do come have a view
of this fuzzy, comedy dromedary beau!

Send in the paparazzi, for he's already saying cheese
But he prefers his own kind, send in some lady llamas please.

Hey, like humans, llamas can stick their tongues out
and spit to express displeasure
So keep your distance from angry ones
or you will regret the mismeasure .

The one in the picture is a cool llama teenager
but he's no teeny-bopper, for he's a teetotaller
as no one ever saw him with a bottle of gin or lager!

Author's Note

Click on top side pic to enlarge n zoom n see it.

Reviews

[Shep]

Ok, it made me say cheese with a smile and wanted me to stick my tongue out and spit like a Llamas dose.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks soo much for comment but just smile ok, spitting out maybe for a fun try lol.

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Llamas, huh? Not a very pleasant animal from my experience. Constantly in a state of irritation, I find.

An interesting theme to write on. They certainly do have very different personalities. A neat write, if a little unstructured and out of rhyme scheme at times. Rhyme should always be consistent from beginning to end. At least i believe that.

Keep writing.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Warm thanks for comment n constructive criticism l ah yes my meandering muse, the rhyming just following it into haywire rhyming sorry about that, really don't know how to edit.
Llamas yeah they can be nice and angry sometimes, u r right different personalities.

[Gee]

Nice rhyming in this Zaynab, and funny as well.
Well done you.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks soo much for a nice cool comment! Cheers.

[angel]

Cool rhyming; I enjoyed this. You might like my poem called DAD WENT AWOL. No llamas, but hey, there's an elephant in it!
I never thought of llamas having much personality...I do now, though. Great job!

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

All animals have a personality somewhat i like how u said that yayy. would love to read more from u.
Warmest thanks poetess!

[Ana Papaya]

this was really cute S. well done

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Warmest thanks!

[kentuck14]

"Showbiz dromedary drama!" And you my friend better sign them up for a gig in LLamaland. Perhaps you could be their agent?!
A great poem! You have a wonderful sense of humor.
Tom

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks for thinking my humour is good enough, light n fun I try. Best wishes poet!

[barleygirl]

Great poem taking your readers on a ride thru all the possibilities in llama-ville! Love how you personify the creatures, bringing them alive in words. Love how you craft fun phrases like your title . . . and "comedy dromedary beau" . . . "toss those bangs" & more. As I read along, you keep coming up with fresh material to keep this fun poem bouncing along! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Wow great to hear from you barley girl! Warmest thanxx for such a lovely review. Will be to your poems too soon.

[Flowers of Eternity]

Your poem is really fun and enjoyable to read! I really like it!
Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem to us!
It has a power to put a smile on your face!
Good Job!

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Warmest thanks for review and am glad to spread a smile!

[Chris Shaw]

Hey Zay, Zay my friend. This is such a cute poem and I loved looking at your pics. I have to admit they do look as though they are smiling. Such an original and happy poem. You have put a smile on my face on a cold winter evening. Hope you are yours are all well.

Chris

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Yayy I'm thrilled to put a smile on my fav poetess and pal. Glad you enjoyed, I hoped u would. Warmest thanks for the feedback! Take care.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Cute poem I like your style here

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Warmest thanks fellow poetess!