My Soul to Take

Sleep so that 

I know your name and I know you are here with me tonight.

Naked in my eyes you are clothed of your dignity as I stare at you.

Sleep so that

I remember the first kiss we had and how it took me so long to figure 

you were so deeply into me in the first place.

Sloppy you might say about the tongue but alas I tell you, even it can

get awkward but I know your kiss is what I desired.

Sleep so that

I acquaint my stars to yours as I tell them that no luminescence has ever

shone brighter as you are here eyes closed.

For what matters most in my stars is they belong in a light where you 

are in the center of them because I can see it.

Sleep so that

I confide my heart to you alone when I tell you they are yours to be 

taken away because I know my weaknesses.

As it is better to be mocked and laughed at I enjoy knowing I can 

let myself be penetrated of your laughter.

Sleep so that

I familiarize my soul to you for yours is what I enjoy finding my 

mystic path for you I enjoy this moment peacefully.

For what depth is there to look at when I need to keep

diving into your endless sky ocean that I no suffocate from

but endure every breathless moment.

As my soul is taken away in rapture you show a 

brilliance like the million suns that brazenly shines

on this gray skies that we are under. 

Slumber in peacefully and dream ever so contentiously 

that I let my nightmares be the shield and the dream 

as the sword. 

Reviews

[tuvi]

hehe ......SLEEP SO THAT ....
Like that tag ... :P you why rite ?

nice work here .... cant believe some in loss of sleep does something like this :P
you have such vast lexicon that you leave me spell bound each time I read one of your work ...

some of the lines I really found very cute :
" remember the first kiss we had and how it took me so long to figure "
"For what matters most in my stars is they belong in a light where you
are in the center of them because I can see it. "
"I confide my heart to you alone when I tell you they are yours to be "
" I familiarize my soul to you for yours is what I enjoy finding my
mystic path for you I enjoy this moment peacefully "

I used the word because I could somehow magically connect to these lines .... should I some sorta alchemy .... :P

Thanks for this wonderful share !!

Love,
Tuvi

[Zero_Edge88]

Coinkidinkally, I asked of your opinion on this one haha! :)
Yes people who have sleepless nights have these much power of their own when it comes to writing down what they say haha :P

Thank you very much! It is wonderful isn't it? To be spellbound and taken away right?

Ah, perhaps the word you look for is compounding because they do connect and stack up each other like alchemists would do when they perform such feats of soulful strength! :P

You're very welcome and thank you for the review :)

Love,
Zero

[tuvi]

:) lolz....

[Pryde Foltz]

A very romantic and well-penned write, Zero. Some one is loved.

[Traci]

This is the first piece of yours I've read and I am truly impressed, Zero. This is so well penned, beautifully articulated, from the imagery to your words, it is very heartfelt.

Wandering sleepless souls.

"I familiarize my soul to you for yours is what I enjoy finding my
mystic path for you I enjoy this moment peacefully."....LOVE THIS!!!

"Slumber in peacefully and dream ever so contentiously
that I let my nightmares be the shield and the dream
as the sword."

A very nice conclusion. Definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you very much Lady Traci. I have learned that even if I am not able to embed images when I write these down, I hope and firmly believe that I will be able to convey my message for my readers.

I mean this was penned down to the very minute when I was thinking about the lines and stanzas. So it was really quite something :)

Hope you have a beautiful day and don't forget to check out "High School" and "College" for any reminescent ;) :)

[Traci]

Always a pleasure to read your work, Zero. You not only embed images you convey a very strong message and as a reader I appreciate that. I like to not only read, but feel something. I am looking forward to reading the two you mentioned :) And you have a beautiful day as well.

[Vikrantsingh]

This one is wonderful and created many shades which sharing this piece. Definitely i would like to know what made you write this. Loved this art work and your creativity speaks what was running while you wrote this poem. Hope you sleep so that.......
Lovely title before every para.. Must read it twice to link up and hold your interest again when you read it 2nd time.

Wonderful narration and explained mate :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Thanks Bro! Sleepless nights gives you different episodes and depending on what channel your mind and heart is on, it focuses on that very moment. This one feeling of a longing love was what was aired that night. I must say I have become fonder of what might love be or is even though I have not been in a relationship. It's the concept of it that makes me think.

Thank you very much definitely! Have a good day, it's 6:57 AM in here and I have to be at work for a while! (Haven't slept yet so haha!)
Cheers!
Zero :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol you should sleep, later after you marriage ones you turn up to a father, you will say Oh! god give me sleep :P

[sakshi arora]

this is so mushy and romantic wow i am enthralled by your work. this makes me say awww

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you Sakshi. I am glad to know you were able to enjoy it! It was a sleepless episode to say the least when it came down to writing this piece. How it reminded me of that somewhere someone is out there holding my soul and is telling me that they found it wandering with theirs :)

[sakshi arora]

:) but you delivered it really well

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you Sakshi :) definitely thank you! :)

[sakshi arora]

your welcome