"Nightmare Land"

"Nightmare Land"

Welcome to Nightmare Land!

Oh, careful! You don't want to end up in the quicksand!

Here in Nightmare Land, we know your fears!

Yes, we have known them for many, many years!

We take pride in throwing your dreams away...

And then when they are lost they can't find the way...

So, they just wonder through the evil skies,

And turn into dead carcasses to feed our monstrous flies...

You think that we are crazy?

Well at least we aren't lazy!

What do you do?

Do you just go out and act like a fool?

A fool who just dreams that will never happen in reality?

Well that's just absurd, no creativity!

Please!

Get out of here your nonsense is going to make me sneeze!

You are your own nightmare!

I swear!

If there are more like you,

I wouldn't know what to do!

Written by Zoe Anne

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Love this!!! Great job and keep up the good work (:
-Shnerd

[Revolved]

Haha I love it! It's very interesting how the narrator describes Nightmare Land. It's a very awesome write!

[Michael X]

wow, nightmare land, actually a unique twistn to bad dreams, i've never thought of it like this., keep up the great work

[HorrorMaster]

Awesome poem hopefully Freddy will visit this nightmare land.