She is the Mirror

She is the Mirror

A Story by Everyday Is Just Another Tomorow
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A weird way of describing the character my friend and I are working at.

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Hollow black coal eyes
Wispy white thin blonde hair
Smooth as marble pale skin
Veins that form a circle on her jaw

During the day she is transparent
In the night she is unyielding

Gaze in her eyes at night
You�ll be paralyzed

She is the mirror of truth
Shaking and sobbing you will be
Everything you want to hide
Will be exposed

© 2008 Everyday Is Just Another Tomorow


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Why I think the description 'Her body pure silver' would be appropriate I don't know, probably the idea of imagining somebody who looks like a complete reflection of everything else. Good luck developing the character.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Interesting. Is she a vampire? Just wondering...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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