Your New Bed

just me being silly

Here I have a box

Inside are some of your things

I have your....

Apendages

Bones

Care

Dreams

Empathy

Faith

Greed

Health

Internal Organs

Juices

Kindness

Love

Maddness

Neutrality

Omens

People

Qualms

Regrets

Sympathy

Trust

Unknowingness

Vivaciousness

Wants

Xenia

Youth

Zeal

And because its my job

I locks your bow up tight

And burried you underground

Where your hopes and dreams might still scream

But will never make a sound

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

I did read and I am glad I did.....I enjoyed this.....Well penned my friend.....Whisk

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Creative to put the alphabetical list in this. You say "no need to even read this" but it's up and so we have come. I think it is very different and grew on me with reread.
Just one thing, I think there is a typo in line 2 after the X line. I had to work a bit to realize it may be "box" not "bow". I may just not know what you intended and that wouldn't be anything new :)
Surprising how things we don't put much stock in can get a reaction we didn't expect.

[emrick]

waaa.thats nice.you get this creative when bored. .i wish i was like you.i always sleep after my exams.

[Her Guardian Angel]

HOLY F*****G S**T!!!! I F*****G LOVE THIS!!!!! IT IS F*****G AMAZING!!!! HELL YES!!! DEFINITELY ADDING THIS TO MY LIBRARY!!!!

~Alex

[Gracie Catherine C.]

haha, this was really clever, made me smile

[Amber Tasch]

ah! love! really cute simple and hilariously dark! :D