A bad dream

A bad dream

A Poem by zubia

A dellusion that created itself in my head,
has my heart beating faster
and sweat tripping over my face.
I pull myself up breathing heavier as ever,
I close my eyes, getting yet another shiver.
My mind dwelling in a quivering soul,
fails to chase the hallucination away.
The silence brings sounds that are from none,
Helplessness sheds tears, longing to run.
Heart craving for peace is all I hear;
The body rests, yet carries all the fear.

Not a nighmare, it is a mirage,
that reflects the shaking soul which lies
inside the person I pretend to be,
when I'vee lost yet another part of me.

© 2017 zubia



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"A bad dream"
zubia,
Interesting state of mind within this poem and it appears to be a day dream:
" a delusion that created itself in head," and "fails to chase the hallucination away."
"Not a nightmare, it is a mirage,"
this was a sad state to be in"
"when Iv'e lost yet another part of me."
I hope that you can find joy and solace in your dreams and waking hours.
blessings,
Kathy


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

6 Months Ago

Thankyou! 😊
Kathy Van Kurin

6 Months Ago

Your ever so welcome!!



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This is really deep.
Sort of out of body experience.
The dream of being found out. The real you.
Like it. You can feel it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


zubia

6 Months Ago

Thanks for reading this one. I'm glad that you liked it. :)
"A bad dream"
zubia,
Interesting state of mind within this poem and it appears to be a day dream:
" a delusion that created itself in head," and "fails to chase the hallucination away."
"Not a nightmare, it is a mirage,"
this was a sad state to be in"
"when Iv'e lost yet another part of me."
I hope that you can find joy and solace in your dreams and waking hours.
blessings,
Kathy


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

6 Months Ago

Thankyou! 😊
Kathy Van Kurin

6 Months Ago

Your ever so welcome!!
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NEY
This poem sets a very somber mood - which i could believe, especially if i had a dream such as this!
'The silence brings sounds that are from none', is a very nice line; probably, my favorite throughout the poem.


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

9 Months Ago

Thanks for this review! :)
NEY

9 Months Ago

No problem!
Oh goodness. ♥ This is beautiful.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zubia

9 Months Ago

Thankyou!!

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