With you...amor de mi vida

With you,
There are no offended feelings to sooth,
No tears to mop.

With you,
I'm held safe with love and understanding,
With sheer will and strength.

With you,
I'm taken through seasons of heart-stirring romance,
Beyond the realm of possibility.

With you,
I'm given a chance to experience, for the 1st time,
The magic of loving and being loved in return.

With you,
It's simply so blissful,
So real.

*... el amor de mi vida*

Reviews

[closed]

a sublime piece. I'll be keeping an eye on your pen

[Zypy Kirubi]

Thank you L.A.D!!

[Frieda P]

It's a beautiful sentiment, were you listening the song when you pen'd this one, I think your shortcuts took away from the elegance though.

[Zypy Kirubi]

Thank you! And no, I was not listening to a song. I am currently loving someone thus the 'beautiful sentiment'. I will try to cut down on the shortcuts, thanks Frieda P

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I don't mind them in some poems, but this one is too pretty.