Thoughts

Thoughts

A Poem by _mal

Unwanted answers. When it hurts
Drop your phone make eye contact
Eat an apple have a shower go for a walk go
To god damn sleep
listen to yourself

© 2017 _mal



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These are words to come back from the 3 AM edge...

Posted 11 Months Ago


Hard to get away from our thoughts, isn't it? Even worse when you can't sleep. Been there, done that, still doing it. Good poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


yes, drop the phone...make that eye contact, get back into the real world, deal with the pain, and move on...get away from the diversions...

intense short piece.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


That is what most of us forget to do. Asking ourselves for unwanted answers. Nicely penned ☺

Posted 1 Year Ago


~ i didn't think of this... didn't know where to go with "unwanted answers"... listening to oneself is so important... when i forget, i fall into a bottomless pit and keep falling almost endlessly...

~ i love the subtle power in your writing...

Posted 1 Year Ago



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