Colors bright

Haiku/Hokku

Colors bright
Green to orange-red
Snap and fall

Reviews

[edie madison]

i live in south arizona and this makes me miss the changing of the seasons way too much.

i agree with another reviewer that i've never heard a leaf snap but i can perfectly envision it snapping of a tree and falling to the ground.

love it!

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...I enjoyed this Haiku, well done...

[Wicahpi]

though I've never heard a leaf 'snap'
i can imagine it.

[James Paulin]

I like the 3-4-3 form. I think it presents a greater challenge than 5-7-5. Thank you for introducing me to Hokku.

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. hmmm ... intriguing ... i wonder why they snap and fall ...