Por Qué

Por Qué

A Poem by Aaliyah Davison
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Why am I being lured into this love conspiracy?

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I strive to acknowledge 
You
Considering my despair
Por Qué 
Do you deceive me?

Emptiness lingers
Me
Concerning your unresponsiveness 
Por Qué 
Do I care so much?

Teardrops developing
Now
Coping with my intangible loss
Por Qué
Do I feel like dying?

My lonely heart 
Stops
It will always beat for you
Por Qué
Do I love you?

I shall never understand
Why you are my world
And why I am not yours 

© 2016 Aaliyah Davison



Author's Note

Aaliyah Davison
My second poem, I hope it touches you in a sensual manner.

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It is very heart touching piece with beautiful choice of words. I am glad that the message of this poem is so clear and even the way of your expression of feelings and emotions are also so touching. The feelings and emotions that you worded in this poem are so pure and honest that you have in your heart. But your worldly mind creates some confusions over what your heart feels. Because whatever the mind (worldly mind) takes a decisions are based on the bounds of benefit, loss and fear, while the heart is always free from these kinds of bounds. The heart always accepts those things that your soul wants. Therefore, it is said that the soul is always free and the heart is boundless. So you should listen untold things of your heart and according to it you will feel all aspects of nature which starts from love. So touching writing.. I love it… Thank you so much, Aaliyah, for sharing it...... Keep writing....

Best.
Szhzia


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Szhzia, for your warming review. I do, in fact, speak from my heart.
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

yes yes... you always should listen to your heart rather than other... because others can not ever u.. read more



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A realistic view on love dear Aaliyah.
"I shall never understand
Why you are my world
And why I am not yours "
Love is hard to find. Need two people on the same path wanting the same thing and being in the right place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Indeed this is a realistic view on love. Thank you for taking time to read it. I appreciate it lots... read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Aaliyah.
It evokes compassion from me. I do not get a sensual feeling out of it. But that's just my opinion.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

I appreciate your opinion, it compels me to write deeper pieces. Thank you.
It is very heart touching piece with beautiful choice of words. I am glad that the message of this poem is so clear and even the way of your expression of feelings and emotions are also so touching. The feelings and emotions that you worded in this poem are so pure and honest that you have in your heart. But your worldly mind creates some confusions over what your heart feels. Because whatever the mind (worldly mind) takes a decisions are based on the bounds of benefit, loss and fear, while the heart is always free from these kinds of bounds. The heart always accepts those things that your soul wants. Therefore, it is said that the soul is always free and the heart is boundless. So you should listen untold things of your heart and according to it you will feel all aspects of nature which starts from love. So touching writing.. I love it… Thank you so much, Aaliyah, for sharing it...... Keep writing....

Best.
Szhzia


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Szhzia, for your warming review. I do, in fact, speak from my heart.
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

yes yes... you always should listen to your heart rather than other... because others can not ever u.. read more

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Added on April 27, 2016
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Tags: romance, despair, love, trap, sadness, emptiness