Goddess Vibes

Goddess Vibes

A Poem by Aaliyah Davison
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Vague and personal, but don't we all know?

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My organ sheds
The remains are weeping
Blistering lava is overflowing my temple
Discard the present failure!
Reboot the next day

Hair extremities overcoming
I'll grow it out to upset you
Extract all organics, to be delicate and welcoming like an orchid
Bodily utopia, no raised skin of irritation

Dark age one day
Golden years the following
Such a miracle in performance
A caterpillar rebirthing

My personality is of a snowflake, as we all
I'll banish you, my peasant, touch me or fall
I carry life, I can decline it, too
You may drink from my fountain
Hence, you are foreign and new

The future life, I know
Intuition is our sense
I can figure you out
But then love you the next

© 2016 Aaliyah Davison



Author's Note

Aaliyah Davison
This poem isn't focused specifically on love, this round. It's more of an inside perspective of the power of oneself (indicatively feminine). No hate is intended, just some hidden humor is enscribed. Thanks for reading!

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"My personality is of a snowflake, as we all
I'll banish you, my peasant, touch me or fall
I carry life, I can decline it, too
You may drink from my fountain
Hence, you are foreign and new "
I liked the above lines. Left me something to think about. Thank you Aaliyah for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you immensely for the warming review, Coyote.
Aaliyah
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Aaliyah.
It is one of the best writing from you. The feelings that you have worded in this beautiful piece is admirable. Because you compared yourself with the earth, which hides heat like lava in its depth, but despite, it nourishes every existing thing particularly the plants, flowers, trees etc. according to their needs. Addressing one of peasants in this poem, you tell him,” go and take that humidity and moisture”, so that having irrigated your farms, you could cultivate grains for others. In fact, this earth is like a woman, who, as a mother and wife, having sacrificed everything for her child and husband, and whole life she thinks every time about them and struggles to provide peace and happiness to them. And sun’s heat cannot smelt this earth because it already has much heat in the form of lava. Yet it gives life to every existing things.
Nicely written ... I like it... Thanks for sharing, Aaliyah


Posted 1 Year Ago


Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you dearly, Szhzia!!
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

It is my pleasure and you are welcome, Aaliyah. I look forward your other writings!
Best Wish.. read more

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Added on May 23, 2016
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