Like My Ceiling Fan

Like My Ceiling Fan

A Poem by Aaliyah Davison
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Stream of consciousness

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Tell me if you're lying
to me and it's okay like
snatching up innocence 
like rape like just not visiting 
the sick like spelling words
wrong like constructed racism like
leaving blankets unfolded like
tell me if you're not genuine 
and it's fine like eating
a hard persimmon like teasing my child 
like fermented kombucha like
touching a moth like 
cleaning not your fan wings
spinning going 'round
never ending 
how can you see
I can't
become cross-eyed
unaware
oblivious to your own stare
keep going 
stop

© 2016 Aaliyah Davison



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Aaliyah Davison
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I enjoyed this poem. Like falling into someone mind and learning secret thoughts and places. Each line added to the tale leaving the reader with something to think about. Thank you Aaliyah for sharing the excellent poetry. I'm on my 13 hours of day work schedule and I will return Wednesday to read more of your work.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Indeed it's like falling into someone's mind and learning secret thoughts, .. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I'm not complaining. Good pay and I receive three days off.
Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Well I'd take that opportunity any day too! Sounds like its acceptable.

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Added on October 3, 2016
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