madness

madness

A Poem by aaron
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read and youll fined out. (:

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I listen to it.

I hear it.

This voice.

This madness.

 

It calls to me.

Beckoning me to follow her,

 

But I must stay.

To fight.

To tell.

To live.

 

Her voice,

her smell.

Like that of fresh blood,

 

and yet so intoxicating.

 


© 2019 aaron


Author's Note

aaron
i just threw this out tell me what you think,
and try to figure out the story behind it. its simpler than you think.

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Alright, so, 'Lission' should be 'Listen'.
'Beaconing' should be 'Beckoning'.
'Fallow' should be 'Follow.'
'Muss' should be 'Must'.

Ok, now I will guess at what the story behind this is...
An addiction of some kind, I think. Cigarettes, or.. alcohol, or something.
Am I right? d:


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaron

9 Years Ago

the addiction is lust, and the madness of trying to face it head on only to fail. so all that is lef.. read more
MeGoRawrr

9 Years Ago

Oh, wow. :o



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Alright, so, 'Lission' should be 'Listen'.
'Beaconing' should be 'Beckoning'.
'Fallow' should be 'Follow.'
'Muss' should be 'Must'.

Ok, now I will guess at what the story behind this is...
An addiction of some kind, I think. Cigarettes, or.. alcohol, or something.
Am I right? d:


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaron

9 Years Ago

the addiction is lust, and the madness of trying to face it head on only to fail. so all that is lef.. read more
MeGoRawrr

9 Years Ago

Oh, wow. :o
Very effective and truthful about madness. You are talented...:)....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaron

9 Years Ago

thanks. :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Welcome...:).......

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Added on April 12, 2011
Last Updated on October 29, 2019
Tags: madness, anger, aaron, cool, rage, me, you, loneliness

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aaron
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San Antonio, TX



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