Very short and quick chapter.

Very short and quick chapter.

A Story by Craig2591
"

Chrissy is getting impatient with me.

"

Chrissy looked up from her lap-top and sighed. “I'm bored!” she said.


Ian set his novel down and looked at her. “Yeah... me, too,” he replied.


There's nothing happening!” she said impatiently.


No,” he agreed, “Nothing's happening.”


That guy needs to do something!” she said with annoyance.


What guy?”


That author guy you keep talking about. The one that's supposedly writing our story.”


Oh. That guy.”


Yeah! That guy! He needs to get busy and start writing again!”


Ian shrugged. “Maybe he has writer's-block. Or maybe he's got something else going on right now.”


More important than us?!” she asked derisively.


He shrugged again.


Chrissy looked up toward the ceiling and called out to no one in particular, “Hey! Write something for Christ's sake, will you?! I'm going stir crazy here!”





(Patience, Chrissy... patience)

© 2012 Craig2591


Author's Note

Craig2591
I have put the story of Ian and Chrissy on hold as I prepare for an upcoming art festival. It got me to wondering what happens to them when I'm not writing.

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I love the voice in this- I will definitely go back and start at the beginning. Still, great piece of writing. Love the conversation and already looking forward to reading more. Excellent style and form, very well written. Thank you for sharing your talent.

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Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.



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liked the conversation. a short and sweet piece. good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I definitely had a few giggles at this. This piece was short but very clever

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Chrissy would be just like this! You know how she loves action!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you. they have become so real to me that this is what I see happening with them when I don't .. read more
great idea. love it. very funny.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
I love the voice in this- I will definitely go back and start at the beginning. Still, great piece of writing. Love the conversation and already looking forward to reading more. Excellent style and form, very well written. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
This is awesome.

-Caradoc

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Caradoc

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I really like the flow and your story telling is simply spectacular!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

you're most welcome
This was a very creative write Craig! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing it with us :)

-CW

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
it's so cool how you got the characters to talk to you. the characters are well fleshed out and need to be put out there. we get to see what's in the minds of characters we abandoned. they haunt me as well. it's good you expressed it succinctly. great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
This chapter made me laugh out loud! Thank you for finding wit in eloquence. I hope the writer's block has since subsided!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Craig2591

10 Years Ago

Yes. The writer's block is gone. I am currently writing a novel. Thank you for the review.
Different Wings

10 Years Ago

Great to hear!

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