Before Time Slips

Before Time Slips

A Poem by Abdul Aziz

Before time slips through icy fingers,
Before dreams whither and run dry,
Before hours run out of minutes
And we're united at last and I
Recount the countless fables
And this sweet endless lullaby,

 

Let me try to draw that smile
On the soft features of your face,
And in the corners of our eyes,
Let our points of view embrace,
And let us count these happy seconds
Till they melt to hours and days.


© 2013 Abdul Aziz



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Beautiful! The last few words completely took my breath away.

Posted 3 Years Ago


That is very endearing doc. You are getting better

Posted 3 Years Ago


I loved reading this poetry. So romantic and full of truths! Beautifully expressed Mr. Aziz.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great job on this, I love it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


My favorite lines within this body of perfection are:

"And in the corners of our eyes,
Let our points of view embrace"

I love how the impetus of time makes you want to live fully each second before it completely dissolves away. The dissolution of time really forces us to confront our humanity and realize the truly important things in life.



Posted 3 Years Ago


It isalways good to 'count these happy seconds' before they fade. But seconds that pass into hours and days can be happy too.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Awesome dissolution of time! The inversion of time running out, to moments expanding into the order of larger measures of time implies Timeless moments, which is of course how we perceive moments to be when we are in them. And to fit all that into twelve lines! one for each hour, or month maybe. Very nice.

Posted 3 Years Ago


An heartfelt parting til we meet again !

Soulful and touching !

Posted 3 Years Ago


'Let our points of view embrace'. A wonderful sentiment in a well written poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Abdul Aziz
Abdul Aziz

Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India



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Hello there. I'm a medical doctor by profession, in search of a better career. Right now, my only pastime seems to be navigating around the vicissitudes of life. I'm passionate about computers and p.. more..

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